what one do you think is mine?
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Hello everyone I have done a comic about feedback. Also can you give me feedback on how to make my comic´s better :)
There once was a black cat who was fat,
He did not like big rats.
He eats his food whole,
he likes his food with mould.
He became friends with a rat named pat.