WALT: use punctuation correctly and write in first person
When I got off my bus I came in to a big place. I had my swimming togs in my bag. When I put my togs on in the changing room I jumped in to the pool! The pool was freezing when I first got in it but then it was warm after running a lot. I loved the fresh warm air it felt really nice. I did so many jumps and flips into the pool. It was so amazing but I felt very dizzy and a little bit sick but I knew I would be fine. When the whole swimming place closed I quickly changed back into my stuff. I got out in time so I did not get locked inside the place.
