Thursday, 27 August 2020

The nice ghost

 

Once upon a time there was a ghost who was a friendly ghost and he lived in this creepy room. He was a happy ghost he had a ghost cat as well. The cats name was Jerry. Jerry was grey like concrete and he had eagle wings on his back. Jerry has a mouth that looks like a cows mouth and a big, wet nose! The ghost has toys to play with. The ghost goes to ghost school. The ghost all ways finds out a way to be happy.
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6 comments:

  1. Anonymous15 October 2020 at 09:27

    Hi Brody
    This is cool Brody. I like how you said there was a ghost in your story. What is your favourite door?

    -Emanuel

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  2. Anonymous15 October 2020 at 09:30

    The one I choose in the pic is my favy

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  3. Anonymous21 October 2020 at 10:39

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  4. Anonymous21 October 2020 at 10:44

    Hi Brody I liked your post so much it was amazing.

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  5. Anonymous21 October 2020 at 10:48

    Hi Brody Im Samuel and I think the story is so cool I really like it.

    what in spied you???.

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  6. Anonymous27 October 2020 at 10:23

    I like your ghost ghost story it is really scary. What will happen and what will he do at ghost school?

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