My Drawing.

 

what one do you think is mine?

My first comic on a google draw.

 Hello everyone I have done a comic about feedback. Also can you give me feedback on how to make my comic´s better :)

My limerick about a cat.

 There once was a black cat who was fat,

He did not like big rats.

He eats his food whole,

he likes his food with mould.

He became friends with a rat named pat.

My First Haiku Poem

WALT: write a haiku poem. It is a poem based on syllables and follows a pattern of 5-7-5.

They are jack russells.

They're called Holly and Russell.

They are very small.

My hybrid animal.

 WALT: write an accurate description of two animals merged into one.

This animal has a long neck and eats leaves on the tall trees. It has some black spots on it. It also has a purple tongue. It has black eyes on It. It has a tail on its butt. They are mainly seen in zoos and they live in hot countries like Africa.

The other half of the animal is pink. It has skinny stick legs. They sometimes hop on one leg but it's rare. They drink water from lakes and pools of water. They have a beak on their head. They live in big packs.

What do you think my hybrid animal is?

My story about coyotes.

One day I woke up on my fresh snowy mountain in north America with my sharp teeth then I went to hunt for some food with my coyote friends. We found some deer that we could eat. We all snuck up on every side so they were surrounded. We attacked the deer so we could get some food on our mountain. Then we took all of them out one by one. We ate them all up. When we got to the top of the mountain we all wanted to go to a different place so we did. Then we got the supplies to make a base type area. We found some scrub to stay in for the night. So when ever it turned night time some of us would guard at the night and sleep at the day. The next day we all went hunting for some food once again. Then we found some more deer to eat. So we did the same thing that we did on the other deer that we saw on the other mountain. We took all of them out one by one once more. Then we went back to our base to gather up everyone. So now we had to have a BIG sleep because we did so much hunting and out tummies were so full!

 

A moment in time at the swimming pool

WALT: use punctuation correctly and write in first person

When I got off my bus I came in to a big place. I had my swimming togs in my bag. When I put my togs on in the changing room I jumped in to the pool! The pool was freezing when I first got in it but then it was warm after running a lot. I loved the fresh warm air it felt really nice. I did so many jumps and flips into the pool. It was so amazing but I felt very dizzy and a little bit sick but I knew I would be fine. When the whole swimming place closed I quickly changed back into my stuff. I got out in time so I did not get locked inside the place.